Particles of partridges,
death from fragment cartridges,
handles like their hostages
without proper patronage.

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  1. A very interesting use of word-play, Nolan. I try this now and again, but just using 2 lines at a time to rhyme. I think if you are trying to put a serious point across, it can turn the verse comedic…and that wouldn’t be right. It certainly works here.

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